From a5694d36612fe7f8a85c6524c7fbaee74dde76b3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Dan Helfman <dan@luminotes.com>
Date: Wed, 1 Aug 2007 22:18:37 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Wording changes to about/features.

---
 static/html/about.html    | 6 +++---
 static/html/features.html | 5 +++--
 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/static/html/about.html b/static/html/about.html
index 8d90098..d819e81 100644
--- a/static/html/about.html
+++ b/static/html/about.html
@@ -7,15 +7,15 @@ It's designed for:
 
 <ul>
 <li><b>writers</b><br />
-Keep track of your characters, plots, and scenes.</li>
+Keep track of your characters and storylines.</li>
 
 <li><b>students</b><br />
 Take notes and make links between related concepts.</li>
 
 <li><b>game designers</b><br />
-Build up your world one detail at a time.</li>
+Build your world, one detail at a time.</li>
 
 <li><b>creative types</b><br />
 If you've outgrown a Word doc or text file full of disorganized notes,
-Luminotes can help.</li>
+Luminotes is for you.</li>
 </ul>
diff --git a/static/html/features.html b/static/html/features.html
index a297d6e..93d5a76 100644
--- a/static/html/features.html
+++ b/static/html/features.html
@@ -26,9 +26,10 @@ wherever you go.</li>
 You like spaces? So do we. Smashed together titles are completely unnecessary.
 You're free to title your wiki notes as you see fit.</li>
 
-<li><b>built-in searching</b><br />
+<li><b>notebook change history</b><br />
 
-A single search looks through every word in the entire wiki.</li>
+You can go back and review previous revisions of all your notes, so you never
+lose a single word.</li>
 
 </ul>