From 4a39a798cd6c3c75481e73640e376c37d391dcaf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Dan Helfman <dan@luminotes.com>
Date: Mon, 24 Sep 2007 21:32:11 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Rewrote the "about" note, because I didn't like the previous
 one.

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 <p>
 Luminotes is a personal wiki notebook for organizing your notes and ideas.
-It's designed for:
+You start out by writing down your thoughts, just like with any other
+document. Then, you can easily make links between your ideas, without having
+to use any special wiki markup codes. Luminotes gives you the power of a
+complete wiki along with the streamlined editing of a word processor.
 </p>
-
-<ul>
-<li><b>writers</b><br />
-Keep track of your characters and storylines.</li>
-
-<li><b>students</b><br />
-Take notes and make links between related concepts.</li>
-
-<li><b>game designers</b><br />
-Build your world, one detail at a time.</li>
-
-<li><b>creative types</b><br />
-If you've outgrown a Word doc or text file full of disorganized notes,
-Luminotes is for you.</li>
-</ul>