From e9198c2d0250c62d173c785ba4780082d433a8f1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Dan <dan@energysavvy.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Dec 2017 20:57:16 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] Some more work on the Motivation section.

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 ## Motivation
 
-Intergalactic brings the distributed web to anyone with a web browser. This
-allows web developers and content producers to publish their content through
-IPFS, while still allowing users to consume it. All without having to download
-any software or go through a centralized gateway.
+Intergalactic brings the distributed web to anyone with a web browser. Web
+developers and content producers, simply publish your content through IPFS,
+and then bring it to your users with Intergalactic. All without downloads,
+software installation, or running IPFS yourself.
 
 ## Installation